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Who is Zach Drayton: He is an 18 year old guy who is enjoying the summer after his graduation from Derby High School. He is in good shape, heâs very good looking, yet he has never had a girlfriend, had a first kiss, and is clearly still a virgin. He may seem alright with his love life on the outside, but on the inside he just wants a girl to love who loves him back, because thats what he believes life is all about.
Who is Julie Thomas: She is a 28 year-old divorcee with two kids ages 1 and 4. She is a cashier at the grocery store where Zach works. Despite being divorced with two young kids, she is a very attractive woman. She may appear to be just âa single mother just trying to get byâ on the outside, which she is, but she also hasnât slept with a man in over a year and she craves to have a man but canât seem to find one.
Premise: My name is Zach Drayton and I live in Wichita Kansas. I work in the produce department at a local grocery store called Dillons. There is a woman named Julie who works as a cashier at the same store. We flirt back and forth every now and then and she always smiles at me. I joke with my friends in produce about how Iâd love to fuck her, they always tell me that sheâs too old for me and since she has two kids that she wouldnât feel very good anyways, but I always disagree.
âNah man, I think she and I could be really great togetherâ I said in defense of her.
Jordan looked at me with a disappointed smile âDude Iâm tellinâ ya sheâs nothing but trouble. Iâve seen one of my best friends go through this type of situation and he ended up getting screwed.
âAlright well what happened to him?â
âMy friend Greg, heâs a few years older than me, but while he was in high school he meet a teacher named Sarah who was just like Julie. She was recently divorced with three kids, but just like your friend Julie she was very good looking, even I thought that she was pretty hot. The two of them hit it off, there were as Forrest Gump would say âLike peas and carrotsâ.â
âI see where you are going with this but Julie is a totally different person and Iâm not your friend Greg and this a totally different situ-â
âNO! Dude let me finish the story.â He interupted.
I sighed, âAlright go on.â
âThey hit it off, and pretty soon their student-teacher relationship extended beyond school and became a strong friendship, which eventually led to a sexual relationship. He would always tell me how great sex with her was and how he actually enjoyed her kids. A few months passed by with no problems, until Greg got a job. She started asking for small amounts of money, then finally his entire paycheck was dedicated to her. Pretty soon he became fed up and dumped her and found another girl that was his age. Sarah became extremely jealous and began stalking Greg and his new girlfriend. And to make the ending of this story short, do you remember when that Jessica girl was murdered?â
âOh shit! That was why?!â I was stunned.
âNow you can see why I donât think Julie is the best thing for ya right now bro.â
I was so frustrated. âOh well bro. Iâm virgin anyways, I doubt Julie would go for a guy like me anyways. Donât worry man, my life has consisted of nothing exciting and I doubt anything will happen between me and Julie.â
âThat may be true but Iâve noticed lately that she talks just a LITTLE sweeter to you than she does to anybody else around her. And I have noticed that when youâre restocking stuff that she looks a you a LOT.â
âShe does?â Despite Jordanâs efforts I was still interested in her.
âYeah dude. Watch out for that girl man, sheâs craving a man, and no offense but youâre only 18 and I doubt you could satisfy her needs and desires.â
âYeah, but I still want to man.â
Jordan glared at me.
âBut nothing will happen dude! Like I said âNothing exciting happens in my life'â
After I got off, I bought a few things and couldnât resist going through Julieâs empty lane. She smiled and waved once she saw me.
âHiii Zach.â She said sweetly.
âHey whatâs upâ I said plainly, trying to act like I wasnât interested.
âYou sound tired. Were you guys busy back there?â
âYeah, I could use a beer if you know what I mean.â I joked.
âYeah me too! But I canât have too much because after likeâŠthree beers I get a little frisky if you know what I mean.â
After she said that I felt my member jump a little. Maybe she is into me? I thought. âŠ..Nah thereâs no way. If all the girls Iâve encountered in my life werenât into me, then thereâs no way this MILF is into me. âHa. AnywaysâŠ.I guess Iâll see you tomorrow.â I said acting like I didnât notice her sexual invitation.
She smiled at me, âByeee Zach! See ya tomorrow!â There was a certain tone to her voice, like she was actually saying âI know that you want me! Iâll bring you home tomorrow!â, and I honestly wished sheâd said that. Nothingâs going to happen, she doesnât really want you. I thought sadly after I remembered my history with girls was horrible. Itâs not that girls didnât like me as a friend or a person, they just didnât like me in the way that I liked them, which really sucked.
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